there's no fucking thing called "calm down"
when i live with myself.
while i still have it i want to use the critique feature for this one.
here are my general questions i have for this (but you can cover more)
1) is it too long? or could it have been written shorter?
2) is the formatting beneficial to the poem? if not, what would be a better format?
3) does this make sense to you? if so, what meaning did you get out of it?
4) is there anything you'd personally change and if so what would it be and what to?
5) what is your favorite part and why?